For Immediate Release
Jan. 25, 2011
Social Media Club of Cache Valley
1504 Lynnwood Ave.
Logan, UT 84341
(661) 772-7537
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LOGAN, Utah- The Social Medial Club of Cache Valley is a rapidly growing non-profit group out of Cache Valley. The group has been meeting the second Tuesday of each month since August of 2008 to discuss the importance and furtherance of social media. Meetings are open to all who are interested in learning and sharing their knowledge. A non-threatening environment if the goal of the group meetings; members are there to discuss and educate those who want to learn about social media. Subjects discussed range from what Twitter is to how Facebook can further your company’s agenda.
“Social Media is only getting more important. It’s not only a means for personal communication and entertainment; it’s now a vital part of business.” Said SMCCV President, Preston Parker.
This is really good so far! The only suggestion I have is to change the "if" to "is" in your first paragraph.
ReplyDeleteGood luck!
-Dillan
Wow I really like your writing! This is a very good press release. Just make sure to change medial in the first senence to media. Good job!
ReplyDeleteExcellent press release, Danica. My only thought, and I'm not even sure if I'm right on this, is that I would probably substitute the word "group" for "club" in your release.
ReplyDeleteVery well done.