Thursday, February 10, 2011

Draft Press Release 3: Cause Promotion


For Immediate Release


February 10, 2011


LOGAN, Ut- Anyone can achieve financial independence if they have the tools and education to understand their money. If the balance between liabilities, assets, expenses, and income are understood, it can be both powerful and life changing. Debt is avoidable and there is money to be made for those who are willing to reassess their financial situations.
            “Freeing yourself from monetary burdens and becoming financially independent is easier than people dare to believe.” Said Cache Valley Area Investors Association President, Preston Parker. CVAIA educates Cache Valley residents on what is means to become independent from your finances. The group focuses on increasing passive income; the money one makes from sources other that their nine-to-five paycheck. CVAIA teaches how to make wise investments and implement the “millionaire mindset” to your life.

For more information and dates of upcoming meetings, please contact:

Danica Moran

801-910-7990

danniegirl18@hotmail.com

6 comments:

  1. Really good! Nice quotes!
    -Dillan

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  2. I would not use free and money in the same sentence like this. Change quote to: “Becoming financially independent, which allows you to make decisions independently of money, is easier than people tend to believe.”

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  3. I really liked your lead. It flowed well, something I had considerable trouble with.

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  4. I like it too, I would try to leave the "if" out of the first sentence though. Is there a way to restructure the sentence without it?

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